Barrel Twists on Dreads/Locs (1st Attmept)

Hey guys, I have decided to start doing tutorials on various dread or lock styles. This particular style is called barrel twists. I don’t think it came out too bad considering it was my first attempt. I twisted his hair with a home made concoction infused with butters, oils, and flax seed gel. Then he sat under the dryer for about 30 minutes. Let me know what you guys think...